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Trapped Within by *DragonnessMekolai:iconDragonnessMekolai:

Categories Literature > Poetry > General Poetry > Open




The gentle sound of rain,
Echoes inside the house of glass.
No other sounds to be heard,
From the girl trapped within.

She watches the world around her,
Through her clear glassy wall.
Laying on her bed she looks so happy,
Yet she still cries quietly inside.

Someday someone will find her,
Look past her glassy layers.
The house is beautiful and clear,
She's fighting the pain she's trapped within.
©2006-2009 *DragonnessMekolai
:icondragonnessmekolai:

Author's Comments

Yeeeeeeeeeeeesh.....I did this one after my test in my last class


.....I had a lot of free time and was listening to it rain...

......in case nobody guesses.... the glass and all is symbolism.....as in layers to a person..the glass house is the outer appearance of a person, the body, and then finally the deepest layer: the soul

You just have to think a little deeper into this one I suppose.

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:iconmythicpoet:
~MythicPoet Jan 13, 2006, 3:04:36 PM
Beautiful imagery, but has a sad message. Beautiful none the less. :butterflytwo:

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:icondragonnessmekolai:
*DragonnessMekolai Jan 13, 2006, 3:18:26 PM
aww......thank you ^_^ :heart:
I appreciate that
:iconstormdragonz:
~StormDragonZ Jan 13, 2006, 5:58:16 PM
I agree with MythicPoet, very romantic (in a sense to me) imagery involved.

But very much does this contain excellent symbolism. This is getting fav'd!

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-Sheena Fujibayashi
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~DinoGirl121 Jan 13, 2006, 6:22:32 PM
Sweetly cool 8-)
That looks pretty cool, I must say

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This is me all the time> :stereo:
:iconriok:
~Riok Jan 14, 2006, 2:30:35 AM
Very good. Reminds me of a song called Glass XP Well done ^^

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Rawr?
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~Tiki-Rongo Jan 14, 2006, 10:11:26 AM
i like that on a lot it was sad but actualy fitting for me... except for the girl part i would have to change that because people smack me when i say i look like a girl lol :+favlove:

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